Anisa Statement of Intent second draft: · Very solid Statement of Intent that covers the majority of areas required. · I think you could add to representation in terms of ethnicity as well as gender (and add some more theory – Butler, Gilroy etc.?) · Add an industry context – funding, distribution, digital promotion etc. Trailer rough cut comments: · Lots of potential here with some nice jump scares – the fast paced section in the middle is exactly what we’re looking for. · You’re missing loads of easy trailer conventions (most text on screen) that will immediately give it more of a trailer feel. · Add some dialogue at the start to explain the narrative (estate agent speaking). · Need more on the discussion between the two characters – I would consider re-shooting with tighter framing and more realistic performances (may need to change the dialogue here). · Add some extra shots – close