1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full. Horror genre: WWW: Excellent use of audio to establish the genre also the music builds up nicely towards end of the scene. Good framing of the shots used, nice angles of the swing. good visual effects like slow motion and black and white. The setting works really well as being in children's playground. EBI: Narrative a little towards the end perhaps made unclear due to the phone shot being unclear Time of the day that was used was not that fitting with the genre of the video. close up of phone was a bit unclear. 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and your teacher feedback, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If...) for your film. WWW: The audio that i chose went well with my video The shots that i used in this task built up narrative The use of visual effects went well with the horror genre EBI: The establishm