1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category. concept 3/5 Structure 4/5 terminology 4/5 Rehearsal 4/5 The title feels like two films in one- a bit of a mouthful which is definitely worth throwing it open to the class to work-tagline too classic horror narrative with past and deaths This should work for quickly communicating meanings for audiences Great to see your researching horror posters as well as trailers Good use of media terminology- eye line matches, POV shots, handheld shots all worth for horror. Perhaps slightly more specific plans/ examples for film language could could push this higher e.g Mise en scene and sound. Representation definitely needs to be thought about more due to AQA. Visceral pleasures and jump scares critical to a film like this- but what will be yours you need to tell your actual plans and scenes. 2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and