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learner response for statement of Intent:


Mark: 4

Grade: D

Comments on Statement of Intent:

·         The concept works (classic horror) but as a statement of intent, you are lacking organisation and not addressing the key concepts in sufficient detail. It is also too short at 465 words.
·         Written English is a definite area to improve – capital letters, spelling, punctuation and grammar etc.
·         You may want to make the beginning easier to follow – title, tagline, genre etc. A working title is fine for now – we can update that aspect later if need be.
·         Far more media terminology is required – look at the brief (minimum requirements) and then outline specific aspects you will create in your cross-media production that meets these requirements. E.g. you mention sound effects but don’t say what you will actually produce.
·         You need a lot more in terms of audience and representation in particular. Middle paragraph is a little confused at present. Re-think this aspect.
·         No reference to the posters.
·         For the digital convergence element in the mark scheme, try and make specific references to the work you plan to produce (e.g. an element of your posters or trailer). The key to this brief is probably synergy across the two platforms.

Next steps:

·         Copy and paste this feedback to your Media 2 coursework blog with the title ‘Statement of Intent feedback and learner response’.
·         As your learner response, pick out the three improvements/changes you need to make to your Statement of Intent.
·         Re-draft your statement of intent using Microsoft Word. Sort out the organisation and use the guidance available to ensure all aspects are covered.


Changes I need to make:

Talk about my film posters.
Be more specific by adding in relevant scenes and applying it to media terminology.
Add in how I will use synergy.












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