Harkiran: WWW: In this video the make up was professional and it created a dramatic effect for the video which was the key element. EBI: However the improvement for this video could be the dress and a better song could have been chosen but overall i thought it was really good. Jack: WWW: I really like the make up and hair within this video because you could see the change which added to the Mise en scene elements in this video and the lighting and make up c hanged which was really good EBI: I think that within this video there could have been a costume change and a better setting to add to the Mise en scene for the video. Jessica WWW: i really liked the make up which was done in your video as it added to the mise en scene effect within it and the costume change was very well chosen as well. EBI: For improving your video you could have had better lighting and better setting to add to the mise en scene effect within your video for a better atmosphere. My star persona vi...